Feed back on pitch was primarily that i needed to step up the amount of production and practical testing. So now that I know that I have two main projects that are A reflection on Continental Drift and Embryo bookcase, I can focus in on those and helpfully get something that really builds a case for my dissertation.
Another constructing thing I was told to maybe reflect on is the transition between the embryo and the book case, at the moment it is using a blend shape to make it look more bookcasy. But to build a better visual connection would serve to improving the metaphor itself and its memorability.
On a more positive note the lecturers seem happy that I have a strong idea and research domain that has the potential to turn out some interesting final pieces. Another plus is that the thought that the visuals were a lot stronger than they were the previous semester, so I think putting in the time to attend Lynns Dynamics class really paid off in the end.
So constructively my main goals for the next few weeks are to:
- really focus on the iterations of practical material and work on making the Ndynamics animated!
- see if there is a better way to texture the dynamics to create a more lava lampy feel.
- keep looking at my frame work - it seems to be constantly growing with new parts and additions.
- take the bookcase metaphor back to basics and think of how better to convey the transition of embryo to bookcase.
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