This Crit post has been long long overdue with notes on my feedback resting in my notebook. Overall I think I got good feedback on my progress, after all my meeting with the scientists and really focusing on practical work after comments in Pitch.
Some key point were to explore more abstract idea and to get more of my artistic stamp on the practical work. I think this is a fair point as my practical work was mostly test done in maya as proof of concept and to know that I could do it. However, I think there is a lot to say artistically about how people see imagery and form connections to other things. I would like to explore this more as I have seen it cropping up in work I find. I would like to try to stay loyal to a practical based project, founded on education and learning vs a more exploratory art endeavour, though I'm not opposed to elements of this in my work.
So to summarise I will be looking more into HOW we see things and form connection and HOW the use of metaphor can make things easier to understand, and if it is applicable visually. My main focus these next few week will be to get my proposal materials all rounded up such as key texts etc.
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